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 Post subject: Shohin Entries
PostPosted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 5:59 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Shohin Entries
PostPosted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 2:33 pm 
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Norberto Rodriguez, Comerio, PR
Premna (?)
Height: in, cm
Pot:
Categories: Shohin

Judge Dan Barton scored 8
Judge Nick Lenz scored 7
Judge Michael Persiano scored 5
Total score 20
Total average score 6.66


Judge Comments:
DB - "Delightful tree but crown needs further development • lovely choice of pot and colour • strong nebari • beautiful stand"
NL - "What makes this shohin reasonably cool is the anthropomorphic nature of the trunk. What does not make it cool is the speckled yellow pot."
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 Post subject: Re: Shohin Entries
PostPosted: Sun May 31, 2009 10:28 am 
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José O. Rivera, Puerto Rico
Jazmin de Agua (Whristia religiosa)
Height: 8 in, 20 cm
Pot: Chinese
Categories: Shohin

Judge Dan Barton scored 7
Judge Nick Lenz scored 7
Judge Michael Persiano scored 7
Total score 21
Total average score 7


Judge Comments:
DB - "Questionable nebari • fabulous pot! • goodish surface treatment"
NL - "While the trunk and branches are a little stiff, the design is pleasing."
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 Post subject: Re: Shohin Entries
PostPosted: Sun May 31, 2009 10:51 am 
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William N. Valavanis, USA
Japanese Maple (Acer palmatum)
Height: 8 in, 20 cm
Pot: Tokoname
Categories: Shohin

Judge Dan Barton scored 8
Judge Nick Lenz scored 9
Judge Michael Persiano scored 6
Total score 23
Total average score 7.66


Judge Comments:
DB - "Powerful little tree if a bit lost under all of the foliage (probably better winter image) • good choice of pot"
NL - "A perfectly creepy root system wriggles its way to the edge of a same color container and projects down the outside of the pot’s curvature – a very nice touch."
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 Post subject: Re: Shohin Entries
PostPosted: Sun May 31, 2009 11:20 am 
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Karim Alfaro, Valencia, Venezuela
Premna (?)
Height: 9 in, 24 cm
Pot: Chinese
Categories: Shohin

Judge Dan Barton scored 9
Judge Nick Lenz scored 9
Judge Michael Persiano scored 10
Total score 28
Total average score 9.33


Judge Comments:
DB - "Excellently structured tree but dreadful choice of pot — too macho and slightly too big for tree • excellent secondary branches"
NL - "A powerful and well-framed tree. It is difficult to imagine it not being huge."
MP - "This tree accomplishes the bonsai illusion. Branch selection is meticulously executed and maintained. The taper allows the viewer to believe this is a towering monster."


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 Post subject: Re: Shohin Entries
PostPosted: Sun May 31, 2009 12:08 pm 
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Evaristo Izcoa, Bayamon, PR
Nia (Neea Buxifolia)
Height: 8.75 in, 22 cm
Pot: Chinese
Categories: Shohin

Judge Dan Barton scored 5
Judge Nick Lenz scored 4
Judge Michael Persiano scored 2
Total score 11
Total average score 3.66


Judge Comments:
DB - "Branches too visually weak for weight of trunk • poor choice of pot… needs to be glazed and slightly less brutish"
NL - "A good beginning in a heavy, oversized pot."
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 Post subject: Re: Shohin Entries
PostPosted: Sun May 31, 2009 12:16 pm 
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Walter Pall, Germany
Chinese elm 'Seijou' (Ulmus chinensis)
Height: 8 in, 20 cm
Pot: Tokaname
Categories: Shohin

Judge Dan Barton scored 6
Judge Nick Lenz scored 6
Judge Michael Persiano scored 3
Total score 16
Total average score 5


Judge Comments:
DB - "Trunk lacks taper and branches a bit stiff • marginally over-potted (a glazed pot would be better)"
NL - "When I was young and foolish, I painted trees upon coffee mugs, trees that had captured a demented human soul. This little elm certainly qualifies, especially from the placement of the lumps, the two-legged base, and the bad hair day. Fun."
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 Post subject: Re: Shohin Entries
PostPosted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 1:03 am 
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Yrene C. Vasquez, Puerto Rico
Ficus Nerifolia (Ficus subulata)
Height: 6 in, 15.24 cm
Pot: Tokaname
Categories: Shohin

Judge Dan Barton scored 6
Judge Nick Lenz scored 4
Judge Michael Persiano scored 1
Total score 11
Total average score 3.66


Judge Comments:
DB - "Gorgeous pot shape and colour • powerful trunk • nebari a bit clumsy • lovely stand"
NL - "I like the pot."
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 Post subject: Re: Shohin Entries
PostPosted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 1:14 am 
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Pedro J Morales, Puerto Rico
Nia (Neea buxifolia)
Height: 6 in, 15.24 cm
Pot: Tokaname
Categories: Shohin

Judge Dan Barton scored 7
Judge Nick Lenz scored 6
Judge Michael Persiano scored 8
Total score 21
Total average score 7


Judge Comments:
DB - "Sweet tree with a gross but very interesting root formation • a glazed pot possibly cream or pale blue (even yellow) would suit the tree better."
NL - "This is a curious shohin in that it seems to want to go both right and left at the same time, accomplishing neither like Obama. The trunk, though, is charming and the workmanship good."
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 Post subject: Re: Shohin Entries
PostPosted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 3:30 pm 
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Jose Fontanez, Puerto Rico
Escambron (?)
Height: 7 in, cm
Pot: Chinese
Categories: Shohin

Judge Dan Barton scored 5
Judge Nick Lenz scored 5
Judge Michael Persiano scored 4
Total score 14
Total average score 4.66


Judge Comments:
DB - "Interesting structure but thin in foliage • Pot too large and bland in colour • nice display stand"
NL - "A well delineated little tree that is shrike-like in character and thus uninviting. The container is more than a bit ponderous."
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 Post subject: Re: Shohin Entries
PostPosted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 1:13 am 
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Andy Buettner, Costa Rica
Privit (in USA), Olivo and Olivo de Cerca ( in Costa Rica) (Ligustrum vulgare)
Height: 9.56 in, 24.3 cm
Pot: Chinese
Categories: Shohin

Judge Dan Barton scored 7
Judge Nick Lenz scored 6
Judge Michael Persiano scored 9
Total score 22
Total average score 7.33


Judge Comments:
DB - "Slightly over-refined, rending the tree a little ‘plastic’ and poodle-ish in appearance • excellently proportioned pot and stand"
NL - "A good try with nice form but little refinement."
MP - "This is your runner up. This shohin evokes a sense of tranquility and power at the same time."


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